Is the structure of this sentence below correct?

"I hope that if S1 V1 N1 that S2 V2 N2."

S1 --> subject 1

V1 --> verb1

N1 --> noun1

S2 --> subject 2

V2 --> verb2

N2 --> noun2

Personally, I think the later "that" should be taken out. But I am not sure about that. Looking forward to your answer. Thank you.

"I hope that if S1 V1 N1 that S2 V2 N2."

S1 --> subject 1

V1 --> verb1

N1 --> noun1

S2 --> subject 2

V2 --> verb2

N2 --> noun2

Personally, I think the later "that" should be taken out. But I am not sure about that. Looking forward to your answer. Thank you.

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